narrative pick a path

this week we have been working on a  piece of witting this is it but it is not finished!!
we had to chose a pitcher  this ore the groop work

I see a humongous steampunk castle perched on top of a rocky mountain with patches of green trees and bushes. A very tall watchtower stands over the domain. Some tiny planes hover over the castle keeping watch so there are no intruders. And a long gray staircase leads up to a large gate. Smoke spews out of factories like a sick person just vomited… how revolting. Inside the castle posters of a terrifying monster are displayed. 

The feel of fresh air smacks across my face like an angel's kiss has just dropped from the heavens. Then rudely disturbed by humid air surrounding the castle.the stone plates tapping under my feet hurt because of the rough surface and after the long walk up the stairs. The vibrations of working machines massage me as I quietly move around.

I hear a roving sound of a million engines. There is a loud swaying and groaning sound coming from the trees. There is a distant sound of people yelling coming from the castle.There is a great sound of birds singing near the bottom of the bridge.

I smell beautiful fresh air but it gets blocked out from the revolting smell of burning fuel and exhaust. I can also smell the trees on the cliff side and bark rotting. I can smell the fresh wet soil. I pinch my nose as more smoke comes from the castle and stinks up the air.

So Many emotions cloud my mind as I experience this, I feel amazed and lucky because I get to see this amazing sight.  As I take this all in I feel so relaxed like I am the king of the world. I now also feel tired because it was a long journey. And as the present catches up to me I feel great Because I made it all this way.

I sleep for a while but when I wake I see something lurking in the trees on the cliff side.

I quickly get up and grab a torch, I check the bushes then a huge shadow falls over me I turn around and gasp as I see a strange creature that looks like a jumble of a horse, a giraffe, an elephant and a phoenix. I start to run but then it says

“I AM THE MYSTIC KING.

OBEY ME OR I WILL EAT . BY THE WAY MY NAME IS BOB AND NOW I AM HUNGRY FROM ALL THIS SHOUTING SO I AM GOING TO EAT YOU ANYWAY !!” My feet are glued to the earth. I start shuddering as his trunk grabs me.

Even though Bob is obviously preoccupied with me, a monstrous thing that looks exactly like all those posters still in the city comes out of nowhere. Bob's huge body starts.  I remember the name of the monster on the posters of the monster: Zordar.  And Zordars sleek but muscular structure slithers in.

It's terrible head roaring loudly, as if trying to assert dominance over Bob. I use my pocket knife to stab Bob's snake like trunk and Bob cries out in pain. He throws me at a tree and I get stunned by the impact. 

As the world comes back to me, I notice I am in a mouth of what looks like another monster. I grab out my pocket knife and stab it’s tonsils, it shrieks and I climb out. I reach the hard earth and run as fast as my legs can take me. 

I come to a stop. A huge drop is right at my feet. I see a lake at the bottom but there's also some vines to get down the cliff, or I could just charge at the creature and take my chances. The monsters were approaching, bumping into each other as they scrambled to me. Click here to jump into the lake. Click here to go down the vines . Click here to run through the monsters.  

this is the groop writing

You run under the monstas legs and You go so far into places that you can not see. The woods  He crept into a cave and suddenly a bear swiped at me. Something comes up behind me and I get really scared and it was only Jf fort of the bear. And he became my friend and he saw something in the tree “could it be?” “what are you talking about?” “in that tree” “what is that it is another monsta.Jf growls and it scadited though the tree and we never saw it again.but he saw a big pile of fruit he got trapped and cut his leg open and it used out of the monsta. I tried to climb up the tree and cut the ropes but there was a problem. He couldn't get up to the top of the tree.”I yell help help” suddenly Zordar comes out of the bushes and says “what is wrong”?and he tied to cut the rope but he was too short and he couldn't reach. The army stared

 

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