narrative pick a path

this week we have been working on a  piece of witting this is it but it is not finished!!
we had to chose a pitcher  this ore the groop work

I see a humongous steampunk castle perched on top of a rocky mountain with patches of green trees and bushes. A very tall watchtower stands over the domain. Some tiny planes hover over the castle keeping watch so there are no intruders. And a long gray staircase leads up to a large gate. Smoke spews out of factories like a sick person just vomited… how revolting. Inside the castle posters of a terrifying monster are displayed. 

The feel of fresh air smacks across my face like an angel's kiss has just dropped from the heavens. Then rudely disturbed by humid air surrounding the castle.the stone plates tapping under my feet hurt because of the rough surface and after the long walk up the stairs. The vibrations of working machines massage me as I quietly move around.

I hear a roving sound of a million engines. There is a loud swaying and groaning sound coming from the trees. There is a distant sound of people yelling coming from the castle.There is a great sound of birds singing near the bottom of the bridge.

I smell beautiful fresh air but it gets blocked out from the revolting smell of burning fuel and exhaust. I can also smell the trees on the cliff side and bark rotting. I can smell the fresh wet soil. I pinch my nose as more smoke comes from the castle and stinks up the air.

So Many emotions cloud my mind as I experience this, I feel amazed and lucky because I get to see this amazing sight.  As I take this all in I feel so relaxed like I am the king of the world. I now also feel tired because it was a long journey. And as the present catches up to me I feel great Because I made it all this way.

I sleep for a while but when I wake I see something lurking in the trees on the cliff side.

I quickly get up and grab a torch, I check the bushes then a huge shadow falls over me I turn around and gasp as I see a strange creature that looks like a jumble of a horse, a giraffe, an elephant and a phoenix. I start to run but then it says

“I AM THE MYSTIC KING.

OBEY ME OR I WILL EAT . BY THE WAY MY NAME IS BOB AND NOW I AM HUNGRY FROM ALL THIS SHOUTING SO I AM GOING TO EAT YOU ANYWAY !!” My feet are glued to the earth. I start shuddering as his trunk grabs me.

Even though Bob is obviously preoccupied with me, a monstrous thing that looks exactly like all those posters still in the city comes out of nowhere. Bob's huge body starts.  I remember the name of the monster on the posters of the monster: Zordar.  And Zordars sleek but muscular structure slithers in.

It's terrible head roaring loudly, as if trying to assert dominance over Bob. I use my pocket knife to stab Bob's snake like trunk and Bob cries out in pain. He throws me at a tree and I get stunned by the impact. 

As the world comes back to me, I notice I am in a mouth of what looks like another monster. I grab out my pocket knife and stab it’s tonsils, it shrieks and I climb out. I reach the hard earth and run as fast as my legs can take me. 

I come to a stop. A huge drop is right at my feet. I see a lake at the bottom but there's also some vines to get down the cliff, or I could just charge at the creature and take my chances. The monsters were approaching, bumping into each other as they scrambled to me. Click here to jump into the lake. Click here to go down the vines . Click here to run through the monsters.  

this is the groop writing

You run under the monstas legs and You go so far into places that you can not see. The woods  He crept into a cave and suddenly a bear swiped at me. Something comes up behind me and I get really scared and it was only Jf fort of the bear. And he became my friend and he saw something in the tree “could it be?” “what are you talking about?” “in that tree” “what is that it is another monsta.Jf growls and it scadited though the tree and we never saw it again.but he saw a big pile of fruit he got trapped and cut his leg open and it used out of the monsta. I tried to climb up the tree and cut the ropes but there was a problem. He couldn't get up to the top of the tree.”I yell help help” suddenly Zordar comes out of the bushes and says “what is wrong”?and he tied to cut the rope but he was too short and he couldn't reach. The army stared

 

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reading

hi readers
 this is what we have been reading for this week.
we have been reading fishing for octopuses in Tonga i hope you enjoy

paper helicopter

this is our science experiment this term
we had to do all this

time  the helicopter

my dad the soccer star paddicting what will happen next?

hi readers
this week we have been reading my dad the soccer star

this is my presentation for my dad the soccer star pirdickson

walt 

where the wild things are

Hi readers we have been making the monsters  and we have put them up on a wall  

this week we have been writing about where the wild things are.

the task for this week was getting other animals and making it into.

monster story

BY DYLAN

How my character changes.

It all started when Fred, a scientist, caught a cheetah and brought it back to the lab and experimented on it with different methods never used before. It started to grow elephant legs, a wolf head and a narwhal tusk coming out of its head.

My mythical creature is very protective and he will kill you if you attack him when he is trying to be protective of his cubs. My monster  has a very fast body and slow legs, a magical horn that is so sharp that it is as sharp as a butcher knife and the head is as big as a lion mane.

 It lives in a rotten old shack and if people invade their home it will kill them if you mean no harm, they only attack you if they feel threatened. You better watch out if he comes near you. It can go in water if it wants to or on land.

Some people will be frightened of this terrible monster. 

But there is nothing to be scared of It is really friendly. He will be grumpy if he does not  know you.  You had best not meet him in private.  He will crush any predators, spike bugs and eat them and it can run like the wind and hunt any piece of animal it can eat.