HI Dylan, You have shown a lot of different things that you like. There are some things I recognise, but not everything! I like the Simpsons, too. I think Maggie is my favourite character. Is yours Bart? It would help the other readers if you explained the different images in your poster - could you add this into your blog post? Also, remember to preview your post to check that your image isn't coming off the side of your page! Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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HI Dylan,
ReplyDeleteYou have shown a lot of different things that you like. There are some things I recognise, but not everything! I like the Simpsons, too. I think Maggie is my favourite character. Is yours Bart? It would help the other readers if you explained the different images in your poster - could you add this into your blog post? Also, remember to preview your post to check that your image isn't coming off the side of your page!
Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
hi Mrs lee
ReplyDeletethank you for your feed back ok i will yes my favrit carter is bart and homer
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Very convincing Dylan
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