nasty nits

this week we have been learning about nits

The dogs at the beach

this week we have  been learning to write a story

The dogs at the beach   By Dylan HB

The dog´s at the beach they  are playing at the beach together at 

the nice warm beach they are having fun with each other.

The black dog is cold and wants to get back on the nice warm 

beach.The brown and white dog are splashing, they are having an

 unbelievable time.The waves are washing all the sand from under their feet.

They can hear and feel the waves,they are having and extravagant time at the beach.

They can smell and taste the salty water.

By Dylan hb

To my blogger buddy :)

this is to you Mitchel by:liam and dylan




 

my six sentence story

hi readers this week we have be learning how to write a six sentence story. a six sentence is a narrative and it has six parts.
1. Has " once upon a time" and introduces the main character.
2.says where they live.
3.Says their talent.
4.tells the problem
5. Tells how they felt.
6. Tells how they got over the problem.
this is my six sentence story by Dylan

Aa

I make boats go fast 

I can be  lots of colours

I flap 

I'm on Page 5 

I bowl in the wind

I have three colours on me

What am I ?

Ab

saying good 

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